The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.

The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.
The given maps compare some differences between the concept of a
school
in 2004 and after development in 2024. In general, there will have several changes including the replacement of the
sport
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field and the introduction of a new
car
park
and
school
building to satisfy an increase of
students
. Looking at the first diagram for more detail, in 2004, a
car
park
was connected to the main road
in
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the left side of
this
school
site, and a main entrance was located next to
this
car
park
. There were 2 buildings for 600
students
to study on both sides of the path. A
sport
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area
was constructed in the Northeast
area
of
this
school
site. There were some green areas in the East and the South of
this
school
area
. After 20 years, with the increase in the number of
students
, from 600
students
to 1000
students
, the third
school
building is projected to be built in the future.
Besides
, next to
this
school
will be a new
car
park
, which will be linked to the main road by a small road behind the second
school
building
and
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. The old infrastructure in
this
school
site will remain unchanged, except for the
sport
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field.
This
building will be relocated to the Southern
area
and will become smaller in size.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, car, park, students, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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