Everyone deserves to be educated. It's unfair that intelligent people are not admitted to private universities because of their financial background. University education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.
I agree with the statement that everyone deserves to be educated and it is unfair for intelligent people to can't afford education,because of financial issues.
However
, I don't think that private universities
should be absolutely free.
Private universities
can't afford to become completely free because they are not funded by the government and they are not going to make enough profit to afford that.Instead
, talented students exists scholarships,which is a great opportunity for intelligent folks to be accepted into private universities
.In this
,way young people are motivated to have good grades and be accepted into good educational institutions and climb the ladder of success.These scholarships are enough to cover the semestrial taxes and all the other expenses of the students.On the other hand
,in my ,opinion public universities
have to be completely free.This
is a reality in a few countries
like Norway,Sweden,Denmark and Finland.The great part is that in these countries
it is not free only for locals,but for every European citizen who seeks an education.There is an option for entirely English programs.These countries
are giving great examples and I think that every country should follow this
path.Education is the window to success and more countries
should provide affordable educational institutions for their citizens.
In conclusion,in my ,opinion private universities
should not be completely free because they will lose their status,but public schools can be absolutely free for society who want to pursue a degree.Submitted by borqnaatanasova94 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite