Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with the view?
Few believe that investing in
art
sector can be Correct article usage
the art
waste
of money and it is better to use Correct article usage
a waste
money
somewhere else Add an article
the money
by
the Change preposition
than
government
which I totally disagree.
Change preposition
with.
Art
is one of a
creative Correct article usage
the
arear
where people can find Correct your spelling
area
new
Add an article
a new
career
and Fix the agreement mistake
careers
also
countries can have a
huge economic growth Correct article usage
apply
by
tourists.
First of all, creative human expresses their talent Change preposition
through
many
ways and Change preposition
in many
art
are one of them. Now we are living in era
where Digital Creator Add an article
an era
are
growing so fast and have new positions in the organization. Change the verb form
is
Such
as graphic designers, Photo illustration and Photoshop. The average salary starts with
30 thousand in Bangladesh and it goes up to 1,00,00 taka with Change preposition
at
experiences
. So, the point is anyone can start Fix the agreement mistake
experience
this
profession if they have a knowledge of arts as is
has less competitive and fast result of Correct your spelling
it
earing
.
Correct your spelling
earning
On the other hand
, art
represents histories
of countries. Correct article usage
the histories
The famous
places like USA, UK Correct article usage
Famous
or
even Correct word choice
and
in
Australia Change preposition
apply
has
National Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Art
Museums where each year thousands of tourists come to visit. The people
can get huge knowledge from those Correct article usage
People
art
exhibitions. Also
, can be
Unnecessary verb
apply
witness
Add an article
a witness
the witness
of
Change preposition
to
others
cultures and understand Change noun form
others'
other's
the
values. Visitors do not Change the word
their
need
pay any entry fee and Add the particle
toneed
this
makes them more curios
to come and visit. The Correct your spelling
curious
government
maintain all the museums with their money and they
should invest more in and Correct pronoun usage
it
organized
more Wrong verb form
organise
art
competition.
To
conclusion, since arts play a vital role in our lives Change preposition
In
by
a source of new ways of Change preposition
as
profession
and Add an article
the profession
also
to the government
by the tourist. So, Government
should not ignore that fact and invest more on
Change preposition
in
Art
exhibitions, craft
expos and aware young generations to invest Correct word choice
and craft
there
time in Replace the word
their
arts
.Correct article usage
the arts
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite