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More and more people are using a lot of online languages translation apps. Are there more advantages or more disadvantages of such services.

#people #languages #translation #apps #services
Tourism is one of the most essential
service
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 for most of the country these days. With the invention of
internet
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, we, human beings have been exposed to much more information in just a few taps. People first explore a country online and
then
 go there in person. Every country has its own mother tongue and culture, and people go to different countries just to experience that. With the help of
language
 translation, it has become very easy for us to communicate, no matter where
you
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we
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 are in the world.
Language
translated
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 has opened so many doors of tourism where one wouldn't think of going before at all, because the key problem would remain the
language
 barrier. These days people are even going for
their
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further
 education where the first
language
 is not English because apps like these have brought much
convinience
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convenience
 to us, be it as tourists or students.
For
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 in my former
years
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 I won't go to Europe because communication was
such
 a hassle there that I would change my plan altogether. I still feel the apps are not so accurate
on
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but they work perfectly fine for
a
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small talk or any emergency if needed. But I think
this
 is just the beginning and there are more advantages than
any
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disadvantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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