Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by some
people
that, social media sites
bring detrimental effects in
favour of individuals and Change preposition
apply
community
. I mostly agree with Correct article usage
the community
this
suggestion because these sites
have been corrupting people
’s moral values and many people
have been harmed by them psychologically.
Firstly
, numerous social networking sites
cause to collapsing
of moral values. Generally, Replace the word
collapse
young
generation Correct article usage
the young
like
to spend their Change the verb form
likes
times
in these addresses and they gain some bad habits Fix the agreement mistake
time
such
as humiliating speeches, cross gender
discrimination and disrespectful behaviours Add a hyphen
cross-gender
to
the old. Change preposition
towards
In addition
, sometimes they attend to riot acts and criminal actions via some channels. Apart from these, adults may show bad behaviours
and speeches too. Fix the agreement mistake
behaviour
While
,
some men may abuse some women with sarcastic texts, women may harass their same Remove the comma
apply
genders
. In short, Fix the agreement mistake
gender
people
’s moral values have changed negatively by
social network Change preposition
on
sites
.
Secondly
, in psychological
approach, Correct article usage
the psychological
people
’s attitude has deteriorated by these sites
. People
have become addicted to get
more likes and followers and they have started that with more influence they would be more precious among others. They have broken off from reality and they have been living in social media. In these circumstances, some online addicts have become more vulnerable to critics Change the verb form
getting
while
some of them have become more reckless. As a result
, some individuals exhibited imbalanced attitudes, harmed
and killed themselves. In short, a considerable portion of society lost their state of Correct word choice
and harmed
minds
Fix the agreement mistake
mind
by
these creations.
In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with Change preposition
about
this
suggestion. Even though,
social networks provide positive relationships and useful information shares, in my opinion, they often have been harming society Remove the comma
apply
due to
their negative moral and psychological affects
Correct your spelling
effects
to
Change preposition
on
people
. 46 dkSubmitted by metehancakiroglu3435 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.