Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, technology has been developing immediately;

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, global inhabitants have access to a range of food and drinks from all over the world;

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, most of these kinds of foods have a

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of

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, which is not healthy items, in them, so a group of people advise that meals that have high

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become costly. I subscribe to

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idea owing to the fact that the diseases that are a result of using a

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of sweat goods need a

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of money for treatment

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, producing

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needs a number of farmland. On the one hand, the regular sick like not only diabetes but

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overweighing is the main consequence of using a great deal of

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.

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, for these

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governments have to spend a

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of money to treat them.

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, people who have these illnesses cannot work like healthy populations

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the fact that their yield is less and they should use their drugs with dishes at special times;

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, these factors are the crucial elements that

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countries from developing.

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, if the figure of people who use products that have a

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of

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climbs, the sector of farmland that has other plant reduce because they have

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cane; in fact, the number of vegetables and fruits ,which have a majority benefit for our health, decline;

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, unfortunately, we are able to see that the number of various ill will be raising, and they have a bad effect on the societies health.

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, it is essential that authorities make so many taxes on foods with high levels of

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inasmuch as the health of the societies is a necessary part of improving both the economy and the level of life.