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The best way to learn English is to learn it from a native speaker.

Some people argue that the most efficient method to study the
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 is to acquire it from a native speaker. I completely disagree with that statement and suppose that
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 a person who speaks from birth can be more experienced, somebody from the ‘outer circle’ has undergone more struggles learning and has more teaching experience. First of all,
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 teachers better understand grammar because they have learned it from their own mistakes.
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, it is very hard to dissuade someone that something he was believing for many years has been false.
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, native
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 often rely on their experience and intuition more than on the rules. No person is immune from making a mistake, and some people make errors especially when they believe their inner feelings more.
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, native
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 have a higher demand in the labour market, and it is obvious that some students choose a tutor not comparing his skills to other’s
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 ones, but merely because the first know
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 from his birth.
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, the most advantages gain people who are studying with both, native and
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. Representatives of the ‘inner circle’ may make many obvious mistakes because they are used to some constructions in everyday life.
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,
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speakers
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 sometimes tend to be hypercritical of the
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.
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, I strongly believe that tutors to whom the
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 is
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 are more thorough,
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 they pay more attention to details.
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, those mentors who speak the
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 from birth are often overestimated in the labour market,
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 they haven’t undergone so
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, as their students do.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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