You play a team sports with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn’t able to play with you at that weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won. describe the conditions on the day. say how you felt about the match

Dear Tom, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I'm writing to inform you of the result of the baseball match
last
weekend. The ABC international match was held
last
two weeks and we, the AAA, had the final game
last
Sunday. Since you are the best hitter in our club, we had a very hard situation without you. In your position, Tim was in charge of the player and he did very well on that day. Thanks to his good job, we could get the first score at the beginning.
However
, soon after that Jack in the BBB hit two home runs and
finally
, we lost.
As a result
, the score was 4-5. Since it rained very heavily and it was a very windy day, the condition was extremely bad. If the weather was good, I think we could get much more scores like 2 or 3 more. Even though we lost our final game , I think it was a very good experience for the members of the AAA.
Furthermore
, through the
last
two weeks' baseball match, I understood what is missing in our team. So, I'm planning to create a new menu to make our team much stronger. I hope you get over your injury and will be back to play again. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon. Kind regards, Ayaka Hioki
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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