Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about how governments should measure their countries’
progress
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economic growth is essential, other types of Linking Words
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are as important.
Economic growth, on the one hand, there are three key reasons why Use synonyms
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can be seen as a fundamental goal for countries. Linking Words
Firstly
, a healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of improvement, and better salaries for citizens. Linking Words
Secondly
, economic growth ensures that enough money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. Linking Words
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, a government with higher revenues can invest in public transport networks, public health, and education. Linking Words
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, a strong economy can help a country’s standing on the global stage, in terms of political influence and trading power. Linking Words
Nonetheless
, if governments prioritize economic development only, it cannot increase national happiness.
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On the other hand
, there are other types of improvement, which are as significant as the economic factors mentioned above. Linking Words
In particular
, we should consider the area of social justice, human rights, equality, and democracy itself. Linking Words
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, the treatment of minority groups is often seen as a reflection of a moral standard and the level of development of a society. Linking Words
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of a society can be measured by looking at the public health, well-being, and happiness of its residents or how well that country protects the environment.
In conclusion, I believe that the economy is obviously instrumental in a country's Use synonyms
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, but social, health, and environment are equally significant.Use synonyms
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