Some people choose to eat not meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own healthbut also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your opinion?
These days, many people concern more about the world's modern problems
such
as Linking Words
climate
change. Eating habits are one aspect Use synonyms
that is
getting attention Linking Words
due to
gaining a healthy lifestyle Linking Words
as well as
giving a contribution to saving the planet. The argument is that purpose to become vegetarian can make the Linking Words
body
healthier and Use synonyms
also
bring good impacts to the world Linking Words
that is
both advantages and disadvantages for many. The two views will be thoroughly discussed and analysed before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
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Firstly
, having unusual dietary habits Linking Words
such
as vegetarianism may give benefit the Linking Words
body
Use synonyms
as a result
of eating a great number of vegetables and fruits. Linking Words
Additionally
, it believes that contributes to solving Linking Words
climate
change, by eating meat or fish that are produced by Use synonyms
animals
. Use synonyms
Then
it will bring domino effects to the farming fields and after that farmers will reduce their livestock. Linking Words
Then
, the number of Linking Words
animals
that are believed produced greenhouse gases will be decreased. Use synonyms
For instance
, stopping consuming meat's cows can reduce the production of methane gases from cows. Linking Words
This
is why it can be argued that avoiding consuming meat will make the Linking Words
body
fitter and prevent Use synonyms
climate
issues.
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On the other hand
, suddenly changing diet models Linking Words
such
as directly ingesting protein products from Linking Words
animals
may Use synonyms
also
bring a shortage to the Linking Words
body
, because Use synonyms
this
situation may cause a deficiency of protein. For ,example some people who just start to be vegan will suffer from anaemia. Linking Words
Moreover
, global warming is not only caused by gases that are produced by Linking Words
animals
. Use synonyms
Conversely
, it Linking Words
also
affects some factors Linking Words
such
as pollution from massive industries or vehicle transportation. Linking Words
Therefore
, it makes it clear that changing lifestyle cannot guarantee people will have better conditions and solve the Linking Words
climate
crisis
To summarize, the two sides of the argument concerning the benefits of vegetarianism have strong support. Use synonyms
However
, after a thorough analysis of both sides, Linking Words
it is clear that
the idea of all at once leaving animal protein can bring adversities for individuals and doesn't mean directly offering numerous solutions to the earth's issues.Linking Words
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