Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals, during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent times, it is becoming increasingly common for
people
who tends
to divert from tradition, Correct subject-verb agreement
tend
this
is because they are forget
the significance of religious festivals. Change the verb form
forget
However
, from my perspective, i
consider two types of individuals as regards Change the capitalization
I
this
matter. One viewpoint holds that people
actually
more ceremonial, but the opposite mindset is wish to entertain themselves only. Add a missing verb
are actually
This
essay will explore both life standards in the coming paragraphs.
To begin
with, in world
of today, several countries Add an article
the world
a world
strict
traditional rules. Add a missing verb
have strict
In particular
, if some people
break these rules, they have a special punishment. For example
, in Indonesia
every Add a comma
,Indonesia
year
people
celebrate their traditional new year
which is called day
of silence. Add an article
the day
a day
This
day anything that might interfere with that purpose is restricted. The main restrictions are no lighting fires, no working, no
entertainment. Correct word choice
and no
As a result
, if people
break silence
rule they are punished, even tourists who do not obey the silence rule are deported.
Correct article usage
the silence
On the other hand
, most of the traditional holidays serve the purpose of amusement. To illustrate this
, any form of religious and folklore instance in the year
gives the opportunity for joyous gatherings, such
as shopping sprees and large feasts. For example
, Christmas is a highly regarded holiday season and even though it is religiously significant, a serious number of citizens prefer to spend this
time of year
consuming and having fun.
In conclusion, the public definitely feels happiness and joy during seasonal holidays and either through dining and partying or attending ceremonies pertaining to religious tenets.Submitted by tjumagul67 on
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