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These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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In our modern life, the
number
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 of
people
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 has dramatically increased
day
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 by
day
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 around the world practically in the largest
areas
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. And
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 situation can be caused a lot of problems.
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, if
individuals
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 are increasing, it can create air pollution and unemployment. Many humans emphasize that
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, the
government
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 should limit the
number
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 of birth and build a
number
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 of factories for
people
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 in odour to provide employment.
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 it is the best solution to prevent overcrowded. On the one hand, currently,
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 of overcrowding, there are many problems in some largest
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. First of all, overconsumption can cause air pollution because if irresponsible
people
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 increase in society, they use a lot of things which damage mother nature.
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, overpopulation can create unemployment among the
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 because the
government
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 can not ensure work for everyone and
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 of
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, the
country
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 has become poor and some
people
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 may even become homeless.
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,
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 statistics for
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 year, India's population has greatly increased.
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, many
individuals
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 who live in
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country
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 suffer from air pollution.
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, when you travel to
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country
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, you faced many
individuals
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 who are living without a home.
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, many
individuals
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 claim that
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 the
government
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 should force some methods to prevent overpopulation.
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, they should limit the
number
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 of birth and the
government
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 should be allowed only one or two children.
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, if parents want more than two children, the
government
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 should fine them.
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, the
government
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 try to expand the land of their
country
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 because ,in
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 way, they may prevent overcrowded.
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, in one of the largest
areas
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 in China, the
government
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 forbade more than two children because they suffer from overcrowding. If humans do not follow
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 rule, they were fined by the
government
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. In conclusion, in our contemporary world, overcrowding has become a global problem
day
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 by
day
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 in urban
areas
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 and it caused a lot of problems which are harmful to the environment. It is the best solution to decrease the rate of
individuals
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 is to limit it to multiply.

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