You have recently faced a problem at the airport. An employee of the airport helped you with this matter. Write a letter to the airport manager and say: - What was the problem - How did that person help you - Suggest the manager to praise this employee in some way

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to appreciate a staff member of your company, Mr. Ramandeep Singh.

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Saturday,

while

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deboarding my flight, I was distracted because I was in a rush to call my daughter for her birthday on that day. After the call, I composed myself and remembered that I failed to pick up my handbag, which was in the cabin area. I immediately contacted the help desk team. Mr. Ramandeep Singh reached out to me and asked for details regarding the bag and my flight. He called authorities to check the current location of the plane and arranged a quick delivery when the handbag was identified by his team. That was a tremendous help because I had some crucial business documents in the handbag and Mr. Ramandeep Singh deserves all the appreciation. I would definitely leave positive feedback on the online website for your organization, and I insist that please provide him with a good bonus. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully,

turanavdeepFri Jan 10 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to strengthen coherence.

Task Achievement

You effectively addressed the task by mentioning the problem, help, and suggestion, but consider providing more details where relevant.

Coherence and Cohesion

Strong greeting and closing, making the letter formal and polite.

Coherence and Cohesion

Good logical structure, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

Task Achievement

Suitable tone for formal correspondence, making the letter effective and professional.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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