the diagram shows the structure of home smokery and how it works

the diagram shows the structure of home smokery and how it works
The diagram illustrates how a home smokery is operated and structured.
Overall
, the smokery comprises three parts, connected by pipes, beginning with a
chamber
through which
air
enters and ending with a
box
in which the food is smoked.
First,
air
enters an underground
chamber
. The entry of
air
is controlled by opening and closing the lid of
this
chamber
. At the base, there is a
pipe
which takes
air
from the
chamber
into a second underground
chamber
, with a lid situated at ground level.
This
contains logs, which are heated, producing
smoke
. The
pipe
at the base of
this
chamber
, allows heat and
smoke
to pass to the final stage. The process of smoking the food takes place in the third and final
box
or
chamber
, about two-thirds of which is above ground level. The
box
is an enclosed structure. Heat and
smoke
enters
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through the
pipe
at the base, passing through bricks which are placed on top of
this
inlet
pipe
. The heat and
smoke
then
rise to the top of the
box
, where the meat or fish to be smoked is suspended and smoked.
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