The diagrams below show the plan of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010

The diagrams below show the plan of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010
The maps illustrate how a medical centre changed between 2008 and 2010
Overall
, the hospital underwent a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which is the development of five new rooms used for different purposes. The treatment
room
in the northwest corner remained the same.
However
, the doctor’s offices were reduced in size coming as the addition of one had been introduced. In the north-east of the centre, a new store
room
was built beside the new office.
Subsequently
, the corridor in the middle was extended. In the southwest corner of the medical centre, a large
room
was constructed containing an education
room
and a mother and child
room
in there. Next to these was the waiting
room
with the reception and staff office which could access by the main entrance stayed unchanged.
Finally
, the laboratory located in the southeast of the hospital remained unchanged, but a pharmacy was added in the north of the lab in 2010.
Submitted by lamgiangta2005 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: