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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant
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The given chart illustrates how people are getting through with news in two different regions.
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, the highly used way for getting information is online-based and through television in
both
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 countries. Generally, the least numbers access in non-specific ways and through radio. As we can see in the chart, accessing news by using online way makes up slightly below 40% in
Canada
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 and slightly over half in
Australia
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.
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, the usage of television in
Canada
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 shows a slightly higher percentage than when compared with
Australia
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, around 40%.
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 the data, getting information through Radio and not specified ways had shown a small fraction in
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 charts. These were less than 10% in
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 graphs.
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, the print method in
Canada
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 had slightly increased by half that in
Australia
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. Despite , the large difference between Tv and online ways in
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 countries , in
Canada
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 the number of online ,access is similar to tv in
Australia
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words both, canada, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.
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