Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we jus watch television. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days,

people

tend to spend a large amount of time watching

television

instead

of doing other

community

activities.

Therefore

, there is a concern about the dangerous impact on family and

community

connections. From my point of view, I will discuss certain reasons why I agree with

this

opinion partially.

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a look at the dangerous sides that

television

usually shows to

people

. Nowadays both children and adults usually spend too much time enjoying watching

television

because of its attractive and diverse content.

For example

, children love watching gameshows after school for hours and do not care about playing with their parents

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or hanging out to play sports with friends.

As a result

, watching

television

become our main habit and

people

's relationships can be ruined by that serious activity.

That is

the reason why some

people

believe that

television

is more and more dangerous to family relationships and the

community

.

However

, everything has its own benefits and limitations, and so does

television

.

Instead

of watching alone for hours,

people

can enjoy

this

activity with their family as a way to strengthen family life. A series of telefilm,

for instance

, can be an attractive thing that every family

members

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enjoy together after a

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day. On top of that, children can learn from

television

programs, and

then

share what they have known with their parents and friends.

For example

, when they learn about animal habits, they could discuss with parents why questions, or chat in class with their teachers and friends.

Hence

, that could be an effective way to form new and

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relationships, and connect with the

community

through what they have learnt from

television

. In conclusion, I partly agree with

this

statement because

television

is not only harmful to family life and society but

also

can help

people

to understand more about the world and strengthen their connection to the

community

. It is only dangerous in some cases, and

people

can try to fix those negative impacts if we use it in an effective way.