In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishments. To what extent do you agree

In some parts of the world, some adolescents do wrongdoings which impact on arising the number of felonies.

While

some people believe that

children

should not be punished

due to

underage, many are of believe that teenagers should be punished as same as adults. The writer partially agrees with

this

statement

due to

the beneficial effects for the teenager,

while

the advanced public safety on the

children

should be considered. To commence with, adults’ punishment of

children

will impact wary to implement other wrongdoings. Severe punishment like adults will make adolescence learn about their mistakes.

Additionally

, if the government publish laws and punishments related to crime, teenagers will be afraid to take violence, resulting in a decline in the crime rate.

For instance

, if the death penalty is implemented, young people will prevent their wrong execution.

This

brings world peace and safety.

On the other hand

, unwanted advanced security for the

children

will happen which put them at risk. Many youths will experience trauma, which resulted in denying all access to crucial programs and services,

such

as education and treatment services.

This

creates youngsters to

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re-offended and

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many mental health issues,

such

as anxiety, depression and suicidal thinking. To illustrate

this

, because of being cut in young people’s hands

due to

sexual violence, the victim will have depression thinking about his future.

To sum up

,

while

youngsters should be prosecuted like adults

due to

the advantages, the lack of advanced public safety of the youngsters

such

as trauma and higher risks of suicide

also

crucial to consider.