The two pie charts compare the different sources on which children charity in the USA had spend and received money in the year 2016.

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The two charts give information about, how funding is found and invested in children's charities in the USA for the year 2016.

Overall

, all the fund was not spent on children's expenses and end of the year there was some remaining fund. Donated food makes up the highest percentage of revenue sources

while

the largest amount of money is spent on programme services.

According to

chart one, most of the funds were received through donated foods and it was approximately just over 85%. Investment income and government grants are in the same proportion and it was exactly 0.2%

also

these show a small fraction in the graph. As can be seen in the second chart, around 95% of the money was invested in the programme services. The least number of proposition figures by management and general was just under 1%, compared with

this

more money spent on fundraising and it slightly above 2.5%.

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charitable organization
non-profit sector
financial allocation
philanthropy
government subsidies
individual contributors
fundraising activities
expenditure breakdown
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budgetary constraints
donor base
revenue streams
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