Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positve trend, while others argue that this is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the handling of
computers
increases day by day in the field of education. Some people believe that it has a positive effect while
other argue that it leads to a negative impact. Therefore
, it is important to look at both point
of view before making a conclusion.
Change to a plural noun
points
To begin
with, using computers
have provide
a lot of information related to any topic by clicking one button. Change the verb form
provided
For instance
, if the learner types anything there will be diverse sources will pop up on the screen and the learner can choose an appropriate one. Probing further
, with the help of a device individuals can learn how to use PowerPoint, Microsoft and other apps which are useful for education. For example
, PowerPoint is used to make a presentation to explain on
a specific topic if one has proper knowledge Change preposition
apply
can
easily get good marks in university.
Correct word choice
and can
On the other hand
, the use of computer
has a negative impact on students and teachers. It seems that technological devices deprived people of real human emotions when an individual meets others can learn human interaction skills like teamwork, sympathy, love and respect. Fix the agreement mistake
computers
Moreover
, using computer devices badly impacts physical health which causes obesity, low eyesight, depression and other mental problems.
In the nutshell, there are many benefits of using computers
during school. However
, from my point of view, I strongly believe that computers
play an important role in the upcoming time and have an advantageous experience.Submitted by gillsehaj388 on
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