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Nowadays, people of all ages from certain parts of the world spend most time at home rather than going outdoors. Discuss the reasons, is this negative or positive development?

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These days the public like to stay at
home
,rather than go out, because it may be a financial factor or they
wanted
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 spend quality
time
 with family members,here going to discuss various factors ,whether it is a favourable condition or not. As people are busy with work and nowadays both men and women are busy ,not getting enough
time
 to spend with kids ,so they are more interested to spend
time
 at
home
also
 there
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is
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 financial burdens,by staying at
home
 ,can reduce spending on an outing like,transport, restaurants or any other visiting place charges,more overeating homemade food is more healthy and tasty . there are very few disadvantages
,
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when kids want to go out with their parents, they very less explore of the world,children should explore the world and update their knowledge update, without it,they can't compete
the
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 world ,
moreover
 staying at
home
 , having
time
 with each other should be appreciable. In ,conclusion spending
time
 with family members at
birth
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their birth
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 place always
have
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 a positive impact as well, saving additional charges on households and
also
 having stress free life cause sharing is caring when caring for each other, there is no way that feels stressed.
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