In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

In recent years, some people prefer to live in urban
areas
rather than stay in rural
areas
. There is a massive migration of residents from village to city that increase tremendously year by year. In my opinion, it is a good choice for the citizens,
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there should be a proper balance for both those
areas
Firstly
, It is an actual fact that some communities who live in rural
areas
are often complaining about the
facilities
in the village. Education and Healthcare are two important things that are needed by
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mankind in recent years. Many communities believe that those aspects are required to escalate the quality of their life.
For instance
, the
facilities
such
as Cinemas,
Cafe
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, and
School
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are provided better in the city. The other main problem is the healthcare facility in the village is not as good as
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city has. One of the main causes is the lack of development in those
areas
. 50 years ago, many governments underestimated the issue of population and growth issues in their country.
As a result
, the number of residents is centralized in the modern town,
thus
it affects the development of supporting
facilities
inside the town as well, and it raises the disparity between those
areas
.
For example
, 70% of the cities in Indonesia are dominated by
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construction in
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modern area.
In addition
, to avoid
this
kind of problem, the government should provide the same
facilities
in the rural
areas
which they provide in the urban
areas
. In conclusion, moving into the different
areas
is one thing that can be considered for the citizens if there is a balance between these two
areas
.
Therefore
, family and government should work together and develop the places. So, there is no need for societies to move into urban
areas
.
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