Some people think that organizing international sports events is good for the host country while others think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion

Sports is a multi-million-pound industry as it is an exciting event to those who facilitate the international sports,the host nation as the society perceive it whereas,others anticipate it is an unpleasant idea.

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will discuss both

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that there is

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of investors and sport

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and

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are prone to taking drugs where

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will state my opinion.

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events attract investors

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jobs in the community,

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for the host nation since by that moment there is

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of followers

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trending there.

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,2021 stars newspapers indicated that there is 60% growth in countries

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hold Olympic

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every season.

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activities

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Secondly

,the Players are prone to taking drugs so that they can have maximum energy to sustain them ,

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when it is discovered it does not only deteriorate their name but

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the name of their country.

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, in 2000 half of the players in Europe had 30% content of drug from lab results done in

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kemiri

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a bad picture of the wonderful

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football. To sum up,having the responsibility to manage international game

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is an excellent phenomenon for that country.My opinion is to have rules that govern

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so that they are not detrimental to the country

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it is done.