governments should spend tax money on public libraries rather than public transportation improvements. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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of

libraries

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to their daily life and work.

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, residents think their government should spend tax

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on public

libraries

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rather than public means of

transportation

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.

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i

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disagree with their

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opinion

oppinion

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opinion

because of the On the one hand, public

libraries

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bring local residents a large number of benefits

such

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as

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slient

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client

silent

place

where

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help

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them more concentrate on working , or a vast area to finish group

assingments

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assignments

.

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a big data

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,

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of various books

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here,

therefore

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humans often choose them to look up

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information

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for

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.

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, my high school is beside a library,

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after my

school

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i

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go to one to study with my friends

,

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and discuss

about

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several problems in studying. I

fell

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my efficiency

of

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studying in

libraries

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is much higher than in my house, and numerous

kind

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of

researchs

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research

have the same conclusion.

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, public

transportation

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has significantly

contribute

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to

save

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driving time

,

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and

reduce

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traffic jams.Developed countries are a good example

for

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this

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statement, a huge number of public

transportation

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like underground electrical trains,

bus

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, etc help traffic jams can be seen in

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this

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countries. Another benefit of investment

on

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public

transportation

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is connect

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rural areas with urban, which can make

over population

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overpopulation

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went down, and people can work far from their

house

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.

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, both of them have different benefits,

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governments should consider cautiously

to use

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dweller

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tax efficiency and bring

bring

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the greatest benefit possible.