the diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned.

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which

sheep

embryos are cloned of three

sheep

, among

sheep

A,

B

and

C

. Looking from

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perspective,

it is clear that

from

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sheep

A was cloned another

sheep

, and

sheep

B

and

C

helped with that.

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all

sheep

is

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female, and

second

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sheep

A was born in

sheep

C

. As

it

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illustrates

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from

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sheep

A was

take

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only body

cell

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and DNA,

also

from female

B

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egg

cell

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and nucleus. That helped to

made

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DNA from

sheep

A fused with

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cell

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from

sheep

B

,

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after they placed that in

uterus

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of

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mother which is

sheep

C

. And

as a result

, they developed

clone

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of

sheep

A.

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, how we can notice, all

sheeps

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mothers of clone, even though they are all females.