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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teacher. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#parents #teacher #support
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There are many arguments related to the question Who is the best person to teach
children
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? Some people believe that schools play an important role in teaching
children
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while
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 others think that
parents
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 will take it better. From my point of view, I strongly believe that
parents
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 will do better because they are closer to their
children
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 and it is easier than teachers in teaching different
skills
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 in order to develop
children
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 to be more confident. First of all, from birth,
parents
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 are the first people who talk to and teach
children
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. They teach them basic
skills
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such
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 as walking, speaking, behaving, communicating with others, etc
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 Every
child
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 is like a white paper and the responsibility of
parents
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 is to teach them.
Children
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 usually follow their
parents
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, from basic things to more complex things.
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, when
parents
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 always use bad words when communicating with others,
children
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 will follow them and try to speak bad words like their
parents
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. It makes a bad habit for
children
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 and make many consequences
after
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this
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.
Secondly
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,
parents
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 are closer to
children
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 than teachers in schools. They can observe their
children
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's behaviour and find more ways to teach them. If a
child
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 does good
action
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 or improves their bad
skills
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,
parents
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 should have some acts of appreciation and encourage them to continue. If a
child
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 still does bad
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, they need to give them punishment and warn about
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action
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.
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,if a
child
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 tries to improve their physical
skills
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 and get a better score in
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class,
parents
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 should have some appropriate
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such
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 as buying their favourite things or more simple
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 encourages them to keep trying. In conclusion,
parents
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 play an important role in teaching
children
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.
Children
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 who are cared for and taught by
parents
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 will become good people with emotional intelligence, moral values and
skills
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.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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