The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about how many people travelled to a Caribbean island that has several kinds of staycations over a
period
of seven years from 2010 to 2017.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the highest number of Linking Words
visitors
is total which is both staying on cruise ships and land, Use synonyms
while
the lowest number of tourists is staying on the island.
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To begin
, stood at 2010, the number of total Linking Words
visitors
is the highest Use synonyms
rate
which reached a peak Use synonyms
at
1 Change preposition
of
million
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visitors
, it climbed dramatically until 2015 which is just above 2.5 Use synonyms
million
people and remained constant until 2016. After that, it increased substantially Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
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year
to around 3.5 Use synonyms
million
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visitors
.
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According to
the data tourists staying on cruise ships had a slight growth at around 0.5 Linking Words
million
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visitors
in 2010. Use synonyms
After
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this
, it decreased Linking Words
at
around 0.35 Change preposition
to
million
people. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the same Linking Words
rate
at the beginning Use synonyms
period
time. Use synonyms
Then
, the trend rocketed considerably Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
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year
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
visitors
who stayed on the island had a sharp rise Use synonyms
rate
from 2010 to 2013. Use synonyms
Next,
from 2013 to 2015, it levelled off at around 1.5 Linking Words
million
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visitors
and there was a gradual decline in 2016. In the final Use synonyms
year
, it went up at an equal Use synonyms
rate
as the Use synonyms
year
2015.Use synonyms
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