The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about how many people travelled to a Caribbean island that has several kinds of staycations over a
period
of seven years from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the highest number of
visitors
is total which is both staying on cruise ships and land,
while
the lowest number of tourists is staying on the island.
To begin
, stood at 2010, the number of total
visitors
is the highest
rate
which reached a peak
at
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1
million
visitors
, it climbed dramatically until 2015 which is just above 2.5
million
people and remained constant until 2016. After that, it increased substantially
at the end
of the
period
year
to around 3.5
million
visitors
.
According to
the data tourists staying on cruise ships had a slight growth at around 0.5
million
visitors
in 2010.
After
this
, it decreased
at
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around 0.35
million
people.
Similarly
, the same
rate
at the beginning
period
time.
Then
, the trend rocketed considerably
at the end
of the
period
year
.
In contrast
,
visitors
who stayed on the island had a sharp rise
rate
from 2010 to 2013.
Next,
from 2013 to 2015, it levelled off at around 1.5
million
visitors
and there was a gradual decline in 2016. In the final
year
, it went up at an equal
rate
as the
year
2015.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tourists
  • Caribbean
  • Visit
  • Graph
  • Summarize
  • Trend
  • Fluctuate
  • Peak season
  • Anomalies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Comparisons
  • Sector
  • Significant
  • Patterns
  • Overview
  • Analyze
  • Data
  • Year-on-year
  • Percentage
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