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The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
amount
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 of
complaints
 received by the Environmental Health authorities regarding
noise
 between the years 1980 and 1996, in the city of Newtown. The number of
noise
complaints
 related to
road
 works, factories and traffic showed a significant rise over the period,
while
 the
quantity
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number
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 of
noise
complaints
 regarding domestic or household experienced a downward trend. In the year 1980, the
amount
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number
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 of
noise
complaints
due to
road
 works, factories and traffic
were
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was
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 nearly 500, 400 and 300 respectively.
Road
work related
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complaints
 remained steady until around 1984 after which there was a slight decrease to around 400
complaints
 and
then
 after 2 years of remaining the same amount, they experienced a dramatic rise, eventually reaching
to
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just over 1200
complaints
 by 1996. In the meantime, the figures for
noise
complaints
due to
 factories had a sudden increase until 1982 followed by a steady rise reaching its peak of approximately 750
complaints
 in 1990 after which there was a small decrease eventually reaching
to
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around 700
complaints
 by 1996. During 1980-1982, the values for
traffic related
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traffic-related
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noise
complaints
 remained the same,
however
,
then
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they
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 had decreased
100
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by 100
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noise
complaints
less
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by 1986.
Similarly
, to
road
 works,
it
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remained steady for 2 years and
then
 rose to
being
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around 600
noise
complaints
 by 1996.
On the other hand
,
number
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a number
the number
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 of
complaints
 caused by domestic or household experienced a downward trend over the period. By the year
1996
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,1996
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 it had decreased by almost above 500
complaints
 (100
noise
complaints
).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words complaints, noise, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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