Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at presauding us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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are fascinated
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it is a useless way to presauding
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persuading
people
to buy things
.My firm conviction is that advertising helps people
to find the product
according to
needs
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their needs
as well as
their interest
.
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content
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strong
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helps
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groups
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people
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product
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product
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of time and Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
also
money.
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