The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
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The above bar chart gives the number of trips made by cars into the city centre by the
residents
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and
non-
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residents
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.
According to
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the yearly ranges from 1996 to 1999, it shows a rapid and consistently maintaining growth from the
residents
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to the city centre and
non-
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residents
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also
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have an increasing chart during these years but lower compared to the
residents
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. Between 2000 and 2002, the
non-
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residents
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are in equilibrium
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the counterpart is showing a sudden drop by a huge gap having an average range compared to each and every year. From 2003 onwards the average number of journeys per day is very low compared to the prior ranges, with the
residents
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having a slight top-notch in 2003 and 2004 and
non-
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residents
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slightly back on the top-up in 2005.
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we can see that the average number of journeys per day of the
residents
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has decreased from 1996 to 2005
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the counterpart has a steady amplitude going towards the right direction but decreasing within a sudden drop from 2003 onwards.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words residents, non-residents with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • residents
  • non-residents
  • urban planning
  • traffic management
  • regulate
  • measures
  • impact
  • increase
  • decrease
  • compare
  • explore
  • evaluate
  • potential
  • journey
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