The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
The chart
illustrate
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the amount of
car
travelling
in
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the
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downtown between two different citizens from 1996 to 2005.
Overall
, throughout the period
a
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the
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number of
car
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a car
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journey
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journeys
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of
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the
residents
was drastically dropping
while
the trip with
car
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the car
a car
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of
non
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non-residents
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residents
was fluctuating. it can be seen that from the chart, the count of utilizing
car
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cars
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by the non-
residents
was estimated
under
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5000,
then
this
figure
slightly increased
untill
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until
1999.
This
count stabled between 1999 and 2002. After
then
this
figure
was
drammatically
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dramatically
reducing
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untill
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until
the end of the period.
On the other hand
, as observed from the chart, the
amount
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number
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of
car
journeys into the city
center
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centre
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made by
residents
accounted
under
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for under
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10000 in 1996.
This
figure
stabled
untill
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until
1999 and
then
drastically reduced in 2000.
This
figure
reached an absolute minimum in 2004. Between 2000 and 2002 years big difference
occured
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occurred
occurs
between
residents
and non-
residents
. In conclusion,
an
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average number of automobile trips
of
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by
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both citizens reduced throughout the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, residents, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stabled" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • residents
  • non-residents
  • urban planning
  • traffic management
  • regulate
  • measures
  • impact
  • increase
  • decrease
  • compare
  • explore
  • evaluate
  • potential
  • journey
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