The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
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illustrate
the amount of Change the verb form
illustrates
car
travelling Use synonyms
in
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apply
the
downtown between two different citizens from 1996 to 2005. Correct article usage
apply
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, throughout the period Linking Words
a
number of Correct article usage
the
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car
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a car
journey
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journeys
of
the Change preposition
apply
residents
was drastically dropping Use synonyms
while
the trip with Linking Words
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car
of Add an article
the car
a car
non
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non-residents
residents
was fluctuating.
it can be seen that from the chart, the count of utilizing Use synonyms
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car
by the non-Fix the agreement mistake
cars
residents
was estimated Use synonyms
under
5000, Change preposition
to under
then
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this
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figure
slightly increased Use synonyms
untill
1999. Correct your spelling
until
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count stabled between 1999 and 2002. After Linking Words
then
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this
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was Use synonyms
drammatically
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dramatically
reducing
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reduced
untill
the end of the period.
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until
On the other hand
, as observed from the chart, the Linking Words
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
car
journeys into the city Use synonyms
center
made by Change the spelling
centre
residents
accounted Use synonyms
under
10000 in 1996. Change preposition
for under
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figure
stabled Use synonyms
untill
1999 and Correct your spelling
until
then
drastically reduced in 2000. Linking Words
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reached an absolute minimum in 2004. Between 2000 and 2002 years big difference Use synonyms
occured
between Correct your spelling
occurred
occurs
residents
and non-Use synonyms
residents
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
an
average number of automobile trips Correct article usage
the
of
both citizens reduced throughout the period.Change preposition
by
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