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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture demonstrates the process of instant
noodles
 procedure in manufactory.
This
 diagram shows eight stages from bringing flour to the factory
and
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to
the
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packaging
them
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. In the
following
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,following
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 we will describe
completely
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it completely
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.
Firstly
, the flour which was
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a store
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store
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stored
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 in the silos transferred to the factory,
then
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 it mixed with two other ingredients which are water and oil to
be become
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become
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 dough. After that, the prepared dough under
pressure
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the pressure
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 of rollers formed as sheets and
are
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is
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 ready to change to
the
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strips. In the fifth stage, they are coming to the boiling part, and in the
next
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 the cooked and dried
noodles
 existed. In the seventh step, the
noodles
, some dried vegetables and, spices in paper cups
packed
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are packed
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 and
then
labeled
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labelled
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. In the final step, the
labeled
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labelled
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 and packed
noodles
 cups would be ready for spreading among stores for sealing.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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