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Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #countries #food #population #import
Globalisation has played a significant role in increasing the volume of trading between countries. It is widely seen that the trading of
food
items
 around the world has prompted people to think that countries should put more emphasis on increasing
the
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production
 to serve the entire population and try to minimize the quantity which is imported. I completely agree with
this
 notion and believe that
this
 should soon be implemented.
This
 essay will discuss
about
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this
 suggestion in detail and justify my stance. The cross border trading inflates the price of
the
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food
items
 which are subjected to transit costs and
taxations
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while
 it is relatively much cheaper when it is produced domestically. If the
production
 is increased to the quantity that it serves
entire
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 population, it will bring collective good for the country as it will bring down prices of
food
 products. A good illustration of
this
 is the fact that the massive agriculture industry of India plays a gigantic role in them having
lowest
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food
 costs around the globe. Since inflated prices make it tough for some underprivileged to get
food
items
,
this
 move will ease their struggles. In order to increase
the
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production
, more skilled farmers
workers
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and workers
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 are required to achieve the objective.
Thus
,
this
 will not only suffice the basic needs of the civilians
,
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it
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but it
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 will
also
 lead to
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the creation
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the creation
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creation
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 of plentiful jobs.
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 will lead to
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int
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 the employment rate which will eventually foster economic growth of the state. For
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an
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instance,
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the Indian
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Indian
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the Indian
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 government stressed a lot
on
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 increasing the volume of their
food
production
 in the
last
 decade which led to a huge 17% decrease in unemployment.
To conclude
, it is better to encourage the domestic agriculture industry and reduce the volume of imported
food
items
. Not only it will reduce the
food
 costs domestically
,
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it will
also
 aid the economic growth of the country at the same time.
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