Some people think that government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagre

It is often discussed by the people about the areas where the government should increase their investment.
Although
everyone emphasises
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the importance of education, which departments should be preferred has divided has become a topic of discussion. Some say that more investment in teaching science is needed for better prosperity of the country
while
others contest
this
claim. I strongly believe that
this
approach of focusing
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subject alone is incorrect.
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essay will discuss the reasons in detail and provide a justification to back my stance. Right from banking to ensuring security, almost all the work is done with the help of machines and artificial intelligence. Considering
this
, it is extremely resourceful to have a good number of techies as not only they can automate our
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work but will
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and development area. Take Turkey for an instance, it has immensely prospered in the
last
two decades because of the presence of
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number of technology experts.
On the other hand
, the demand and scope in teaching sciences have rapidly decreased as robots are easily being designed
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as tutors.
Therefore
,
government
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should rather consider investing more in technology which is the need of the hour.
Also
, there are different types of products and services needed the consumers around the globe. All
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professions are equally crucial in their existence. A good illustration of
this
is the fact that a mechanical engineer plays an important role in designing automobiles
while
oil companies
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of petrol and diesel.
Likewise
, stressing more on one particular department may slow down other important departments which will lead to creating an imbalance in fulfilling the need of
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society.
Therefore
,
this
approach will lead to
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adverse effects on
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country with most of
educated
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staff seeming even more homogenous.
To conclude
, there are several reasons why
government
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should not invest more
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teaching science. Not only it is a field which is no longer in demand
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it will
also
slow down
growth
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of other sectors.
Therefore
, governments should not pay heed to the voices of those who are suggesting these dubious measures.
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