Topic: Many people say that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

In recent times, it has to be believed that the anti-social
behaviour
and less
respect
towards
others
have been inclining
day-by-day
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. The main reason for anti-social
behaviour
and
lack
of
respect
towards
others
are
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because of
the
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technological
advancement
. There are,
however
, some solutions for
this
such
as
the
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psychological counselling therapy and outdoor
activities
. the anti-social
behaviour
and
lack
of
respect
towards
others
because of technological
advancement
. The prime cause for
this
is video
games
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addiction. By
this
I mean, playing video games like pub g and free fire
make
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makes
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them socially isolated and
reduce
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reduces
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the
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exposure to
real life
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experience. So children started to see
world
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the world
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through virtual reality and
this
make
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them anti-social and
lack
of
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respect
. The second reason for
this
is
,
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social media addiction.
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is
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also
make
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makes
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them socially isolated and
introvert
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. Despite the major cause of technological
advancement
, there are some solutions for
this
. The major solution for
this
is, Psychological counselling therapy. By
this
i
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mean, if children get a counselling session from school, it will definitely help them to overcome anti-social
behaviour
and
lack
of
respect
.
Apart from
this
, teachers
has
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to teach them life values, through
this
they can be
a
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good social being and good human being. Another solution for
this
is,
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outdoor
activities
. To explain, Doing outdoor
activities
help people of all ages to see real life and
make
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them active.
Moreover
, they could learn teamwork and be
a
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good human
being
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beings
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. To cite an example, in India, a reputed school has started psychological counselling sessions and received a positive result. In conclusion, it is stated that technological
advancement
is the culprit for
anti-socialbehaviour
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anti-social behaviour
and
lack
of
respect
towards
others
and
this
can be curbed by proper psychological counselling sessions and by doing outdoor
activities
such
as
doing
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exercise, tennis and football.
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