The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graphs provide information on the daily usage of electricity in a household in winter and summer and the comparison based on categories of utilisation.

Overall

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, the highest consumption was seen in winter, which rose up to 40000 units in comparison with 20000 units in summer. The majority of the power was consumed for heating rooms and water. In winter the demand for electric current rose from 35000 to about 5000 units,

however

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by 24 hours it dropped back to the starting level.

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, in summer, though there was fluctuation the rate remained around 15000 to 20000. The majority of power was consumed by

warming

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room and water, which was about 52.5%. Whilst, the lowest proportion was used for lighting, TV, radio,

along with

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vaccum

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vacuum

cleaners, food mixers, and electric tools, which constitute about 15%

percent

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per cent

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each. Meanwhile,

oven

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ovens

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kettle

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kettles

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and washing

machine

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machines

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constitute 17.5

percent

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per cent

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of the

overall

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electricity usage.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Electricity consumption
Kilowatt-hours (kWh)
Energy demand
Power grid
Renewable energy sources
Non-renewable energy sources
Sustainable consumption
Conservation efforts
Industrial sector
Residential sector
Commercial sector
Fluctuation
Year-over-year comparison
Efficiency improvements
Seasonal variation

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