The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graphs provide information on the daily usage of electricity in a household in winter and summer and the comparison based on categories of utilisation.

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, the highest consumption was seen in winter, which rose up to 40000 units in comparison with 20000 units in summer. The majority of the power was consumed for heating rooms and water. In winter the demand for electric current rose from 35000 to about 5000 units,

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by 24 hours it dropped back to the starting level.

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, in summer, though there was fluctuation the rate remained around 15000 to 20000. The majority of power was consumed by

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room and water, which was about 52.5%. Whilst, the lowest proportion was used for lighting, TV, radio,

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cleaners, food mixers, and electric tools, which constitute about 15%

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each. Meanwhile,

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kettle

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and washing

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constitute 17.5

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of the

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electricity usage.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Electricity consumption
Kilowatt-hours (kWh)
Energy demand
Power grid
Renewable energy sources
Non-renewable energy sources
Sustainable consumption
Conservation efforts
Industrial sector
Residential sector
Commercial sector
Fluctuation
Year-over-year comparison
Efficiency improvements
Seasonal variation

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The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

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