On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear sir or madam, I am writing to you to tell you about my problem. I am from Uzbekistan, I am not a local.
Firstly
, I do not know your country very well.
Secondly
, I do not know the roads in your country, and it is difficult for me to speak your language. In some
alley
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I lost my ID
card
along with
the keys. One day I wanted to take a walk, and I walked for a very long time and got lost, at that moment I lost my ID
card
along with
the keys, I searched for a long time, but I never found it, and I decided to contact you. I want
to
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you to help me find my ID
card
along with
the keys.
On the other hand
, the loss of an identity
card
looks very frightening. If possible, help me, and I am waiting for an answer from you. Yours faithfully Peter.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable possession
  • insurance claim
  • misplace
  • irreplaceable
  • receipt
  • policyholder
  • reimbursement
  • coverage
  • claim number
  • deductible
  • documentation
  • authenticate
  • liability
  • premium
  • accidental loss
  • indemnity
  • beneficiary
  • contact details
  • substantiate
  • correspondence
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