Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential to mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, some people are suggesting that we should reduce cosmos

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will waste a lot of materials

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others reject the reason and said that we should continue doing so because it is needed for mankind to understand our universe. I somewhat agree with both sides,

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it has some drawbacks for each side.

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has a lot of requirements that must be achieved in order to launch a successful operation.

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we will need to build a spacecraft which is very complex and waste a lot of materials and money to be built.

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can be used to significantly improve social aid, education,

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and pay special attention to the development of public

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our planet

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routines so that we can evacuate local residents that will be impacted by the meteor. In conclusion,

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isn’t necessary to be done,

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there are significant drawbacks

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doing so.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

256 words

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astronomical costs
earthbound issues
tangible benefits
technological spin-offs
innovation
long-term investment
habitability
interplanetary travel
sustainable exploration
spacefaring nations
international collaboration
deep space
the final frontier
cosmic perspective
frontiers of science

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