Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential to mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, some people are suggesting that we should reduce cosmos

expedition

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with

a

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reason that

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will waste a lot of materials

while

others reject the reason and said that we should continue doing so because it is needed for mankind to understand our universe. I somewhat agree with both sides,

however

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it has some drawbacks for each side.

Space

voyage

has a lot of requirements that must be achieved in order to launch a successful operation.

First,

we need an astronaut crew

that is

fully trained in order to operate

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space

devices and

spacecrafts

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spacecraft

and they had fully acknowledged

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astronomy,

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and survival

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skills in

no gravity

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spaces, they

also

need to specialise in certain

major

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such

as neuroscience,

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.

Second,

we will need to build a spacecraft which is very complex and waste a lot of materials and money to be built.

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can be used to significantly improve social aid, education,

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areas.

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is the reason why we should reduce

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space

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expedition

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and pay special attention to the development of public

However

, if we didn’t do a

space

voyage

, we couldn’t know anything related to the cosmos, especially the

space

mechanism. If we conduct

researches

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through

space

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voyages

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, we may available to solve some major

situation

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that can impact

to

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our planet

such

as predicting

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routines so that we can evacuate local residents that will be impacted by the meteor. In conclusion,

although

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space

voyage

isn’t necessary to be done,

however

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there are significant drawbacks

by

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to

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doing so.