Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating are too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree?

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It is a fact that if a person is healthy mentally and physically so, he can enjoy every bit of life. These days
due to
poverty every next human being is going through some minor disease like hypertension is common among all and medical treatment rates reach sky levels
therefore
, it is not convenient for everyone to take
such
treatments
from hospitals.
Hence
, it is better for all folks they take caution to keep themselves healthy and fit. As far as I am concerned I agree with the statement that "Prevention is better than cure".I am going to pen down my views in the essay below.
To begin
with, the increasing technology opens the door for several human beings to take advantage of it, and in present days there is a cure for almost every disease but somehow
due to
their high cost, it is not affordable for all. Despite most of our society being middle class and can not afford the charges for
such
therapies.
Moreover
, it is better to take preventive caution and save our life from many fatal diseases like heart disease, which are more common in our country and the leading cause of
this
is high blood pressure that originates from taking unhealthy food which contain a lot of oil and some salty food as well. To avoid these all an individual must keep balance and take caution before reaching that point like one has to go for walk, do exercise and eat less oily and salty food in
this
way they can be prevented from many
treatments
and
hence
can save their money
as well as
time
along with
good health.
Furthermore
, cigarettes are most commonly used in present days and their advanced form vape is becoming a common trend among our youngsters.
That is
the leading cause of cancer
although
with advanced technologies there are many
treatments
available for it they are not under the reach of a common person.
Consequently
, it is good for people to avoid smoke and vaping to save themselves from these fatal diseases and try to take some preventive measures before indulging in a
such
bad habit. In conclusion,
although
there are a plethora of facilities present
along with
modern advancement, I preferred to take our daily vitals and maintain a healthy lifestyle and keep ourselves safe from
such
treatments
. In
this
way, we can save time and a good amount
however
, I must say that prevention is far better than treatment.
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