Some people think that all university students sould study whatever they like. Others believe that they shoyld only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

these days, education plays a major role in our lives. a large number of people think that university
students
should study only
subjects
that will be useful in their professions,
while
others believe that pupils can course everything that they want.
This
essay will discuss both views and explain my opinion. In my mind, educational institution recruitment should be allowed to consider their professional
subjects
. accepting at the academy is the aim of many
students
. they believe that path to success through there, but some communities believe that they should research particular
subjects
. First of ,all if university
students
select the
fields
which they want, some
fields
will disappear in the future because nobody will debate them. many
subjects
are too difficult and scholars should make efforts to graduate from them, so many jobs will disappear and society will face many problems. in ,addition unemployment increases because juniors tend to
subjects
that they like and avoid other
subjects
so we have extra numbers of graduation in some
fields
while
society doesn't have enough specialists in some
fields
, and
as a result
, the rate of joblessness grows up.
for example
in Iran we face with many people who graduate in engineering and unfortunately they are out of a job.
on the other hand
, many nations say educational institution
students
should have the freedom to choose the
subjects
they like.
firstly
, if people select a subject that they like, it makes them less stressed. they inquire into their favourite
fields
so it gets them delighted and have enough keenness to improve in that field and can power to creatively better. less stressed college
students
, more creative .
for instance
my cousin studied art, despite their family making him study medicine. he graduated in art and can paint many brilliant frames. ,
furthermore
human is free and have the right to choose . it causes society to have correct choices when they have freedom of thought. in conclusion,
however
, with the disappearance of some
fields
of class and unemployment, I personally believe that university
students
should have the right to choose what they like because of less stress and human rights and freedom.
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