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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

#people #professionals #doctors #engineers #work #country
Whilst many individuals believe that experts in different professions have the right to travel abroad to earn their lives, other people have another opinion about
this
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citizens should express their
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loyalty
loyality
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loyalty
 and dedication to their
countries
 On the one hand, some people look
forword
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forward
 to raising their wages.
In other words
, some nations are suffering from
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poverity
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poverty
, and
having
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 limited job vacancies.
In addition
, developed
countries
 have some occupied job chances.
For example
,
egyptian
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 doctors who
have
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 not
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possibilty
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possibility
 to work in
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due to
 high fees of livelihood
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could travel overseas to satisfy their needs and get
the
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worthy
appreciations
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 from their employers. These examples show
that
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the influence of
healthy
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 environment on employees and their productivity.
On the other hand
, opponents tend to settle down in their home
countries
,
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 and try to participate in different projects.
Moreover
, when engineers tend to make a marked improvement in
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build up
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area
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. A prominent example is engineers who intend to demolish old buildings and replace
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 with new ones, and the projects of solar energy that
was
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 constructed by
skillful
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 engineers. What can be said is that the locals should prioritize their own
countries
instead
 of commuting to
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foreign
countries
. In conclusion,
after
this
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 stabilization, it can be said that it depends on the circumstances and the availability of unoccupied jobs. I presume that individuals should be useful around their lands and contribute
in
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 the rise of their nations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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