The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology

collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce

reliable forecasts.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown

below.
The diagram illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology
up-to-date
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their
date
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data
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about
weather
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the weather
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in order to produce trusty forecasts.
Overall
there are 4 main steps from collecting incoming
information
to
broadcast
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.
Final
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step should be supported
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preparing the
broadcast
which must be done after proper analysis and forecasting. First and foremost, incoming
information
provided
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by
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through different technological devices
such
as a radar, a satellite, and a
driffting
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drifting
buoy. The collected incomes simulate different types of maps on a radar screen or a
satellite's
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photo. These maps are basically infographics and
used
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are used
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for analysis and forecasting. After forecasting finished, different sources of
information
altogether mixed and ready for streaming.
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,
these
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mixed
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of
information
improved
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with a desktop,
then
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and then
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prepared
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the prepared
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broadcast
is ready for servicing.Eventually,
this
broadcast
can be served as
TV
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a TV
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show ,through
TV
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a TV
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newsreader
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,
or
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radio
podcast
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podcasts
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,
even
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or even
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recorded
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announcement
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.
This
is the end of the process.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words information, broadcast with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Meteorology
  • Accurate weather forecasts
  • Satellite images
  • Radar
  • Drifting buoys
  • Central forecasting office
  • Dedicated communication channels
  • Analyzed and interpreted
  • Meteorologists
  • Advanced computer models
  • Weather predictions
  • Distributed
  • General public and specific stakeholders
  • Television, radio, internet
  • Continuous updates
  • Ever-changing nature
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