The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million)
The given table provides information about the changes in people who went on overseas travel in
the
Africa, America, Asia and the Pacific, Correct article usage
apply
Europe
and the Middle
East in four different years.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of travellers increase over the year with Europe
as the top tourist destination among the five countries while
the Middle
East is the least visited.
According to
the graph, in 1990, 18.2 people million
travelled to Africa, 80.5 million
to America, 60.2
Correct word choice
and 60.2
million
to Asia and the Pacific. 9.8 million
to the Middle
East and 280.2 million
to Europe
. ,Meanwhile
in 1995, the number of international travellers increased in figures to a total of 615.2 Add a comma
,Meanwhile
million
travellers. The same happened in 2000 and 2005, more and more tourists spend time travelling, with a total of 669.2 million
and 693.7 million
respectively. The most visited country was Europe
followed by Asia and the Pacific, then
America, next is Africa and lastly
the Middle
East.Submitted by mercadolailanie on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, middle, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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