The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million)
The given table provides information about the changes in people who went on overseas travel in
the
Africa, America, Asia and the Pacific, Correct article usage
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Europe
and the Use synonyms
Middle
East in four different years.
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Overall
, it can be seen that the number of travellers increase over the year with Linking Words
Europe
as the top tourist destination among the five countries Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
Middle
East is the least visited.
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According to
the graph, in 1990, 18.2 people Linking Words
million
travelled to Africa, 80.5 Use synonyms
million
to America, Use synonyms
60.2
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and 60.2
million
to Asia and the Pacific. 9.8 Use synonyms
million
to the Use synonyms
Middle
East and 280.2 Use synonyms
million
to Use synonyms
Europe
. ,Use synonyms
Meanwhile
in 1995, the number of international travellers increased in figures to a total of 615.2 Add a comma
,Meanwhile
million
travellers. The same happened in 2000 and 2005, more and more tourists spend time travelling, with a total of 669.2 Use synonyms
million
and 693.7 Use synonyms
million
respectively. The most visited country was Use synonyms
Europe
followed by Asia and the Pacific, Use synonyms
then
America, next is Africa and Linking Words
lastly
the Linking Words
Middle
East.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, middle, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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