Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In modern society, there are plenty of cutting-edge technologies that are becoming popular.

Computer

is one among them.

While

some people concur that daily usage of computers can cause many disadvantages for their

children

, I strongly deny the fact.

This

essay will discuss in detail more important aspects of using the

computer

.

Firstly

, the world can never be imagined without

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for our day-to-day activities. Most importantly,

children

are given the opportunity to do self-learning by using

computer

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.

For instance

, In my friend's family, both parents are earning in order to maintain their financial status and give a healthy life to their kids.

However

, they failed to realize the fact that , spending time on

children

's curriculum is more important than earning more money. Since the kids have an opportunity to explore

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and acquire more awareness of current trends in the world by using the

computer

, they score well in academics.

Secondly

, It is indispensable that the utilization of

computer

by kids are increasingly admired around the globe. If teens are given adequate facilities to utilize

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at a young age, it will aid them to attain the required skills in any field that they desire.

For instance

,

children

can gain additional knowledge other than the standard curriculum that they learn at school. They can even develop video games and freelance them in the market. They learn to earn in the right way by effectively applying their knowledge.

Consequently

, It will help them choose the right career in the future. In conclusion,

Although

many people strongly believe that daily usage of

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can cause detrimental effects on

children

, I wholeheartedly deny that. The advantages of

children

using the

computer

far outweigh the demerits of it. I firmly conclude that

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offspring can definitely acquire more and more knowledge by using the

computer

in the longer run.