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you recently received an invitation to a three day training programe which should be benefit you and the company write a letter to you manager and say:- ask to attend the program decribe the program explain how the program will benefit the company write at least 150 words invitation day program taining manager attend program details and benefits

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Der Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 in regard to the mail received on the Machine
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learning
 course event at our headquarter office. I will be free next month and thinking of attending the same;
hence
, I am requesting you to look into
this
 and let me know If I can attend the same. The Program is about
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cutting edge
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 technology called machine learning and is suitable for
beginers
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beginners
 as well. Experts and industrial leaders are leading
this
 program and it
also
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 some
real life
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 scenarios as well.
Additionally
, our organization is introducing
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 project based on machine learning in near future and
this
 learning will help our organization in a
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 many ways.
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 provided by these experts will help us to achieve our goals very soon. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Kishan
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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