The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive.  The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s
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The pie chart illustrates the cause of worldwide
land
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degradable. The table
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represents that how three regions ( North America,
Europe
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,
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and Oceania
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) were affected by the causes of
land
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degradation
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during the 1990s.
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, over-grazing, over-farming and deforestation were the main reasons for decreasing
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land
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productivity.
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,
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Europe
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had the highest proportion of total
land
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degradation
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,
whereas
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,
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North America was the least. It can be clearly seen that the percentage of
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over
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gazing was up to 35% ,
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, the figure for deforestation
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accounted for 30%.
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, the proportion of
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over cultivation
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had to 28%.
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, others affected the
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only 7%
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,
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Europe
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was affected badly rather than
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the other
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two regions by the causes of
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degradation
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which was up to 23% and
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Europe
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's
land
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was hampered
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deforestation
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9.8%. The figure for Oceania had to 13% which was caused for over-grazing at 11.3%. The percentage of
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degradation
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in
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North America had to 5% and it was
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the lowest proportion.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, europe, degradation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Soil degradation
  • Over-grazing
  • Deforestation
  • Climate change
  • Erosion
  • Soil nutrients
  • Regional impact
  • Regional variations
  • Food security
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Reforestation
  • Land management
  • Mitigation
  • Livestock
  • Vegetation
  • Geographical contexts
  • Economies
  • Communities
  • Historical contexts
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