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In some countries, some criminal trials in law courts are shown on TV so public can watch. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages to do so and give your opinion.

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In many nations, it is very common that criminal
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 to be shown on public TV channels. From my perspective,
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 phenomenon could be both positive and negative. The shows can provide education to citizens and help them to understand the laws.
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, it may not be an appropriate
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 for
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 since it may
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 crime scenes. Both sides have their own merits, which will be outlined below. On one hand, the policy to
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 criminal
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 gives advantages to the city since it will allow a
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 to learn about legal and illegal activities.
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, it can help to prevent similar crimes to be conducted.
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, it
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 can help
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 to understand the flow of criminal
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.
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, what is the first thing that the police need to do after arresting a potential criminal?
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,
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 understands how to stand up for themselves if any misconduct in criminal
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 ever happens to them. All
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 knowledge is very important for the
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 to understand their country's laws since most of the time schools won't teach anything related to criminal laws.
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, the timing of the criminal
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 shows need to be at everyone's attention. Criminal
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 sometimes
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 how the criminal happened, shows the victim's condition, and the situation at the crime scene. These images are very disturbing.
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 should not watch any of these scenes since they may cause trauma.
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, a trial for a convicted murderer may
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 the image of blood and weapons.
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children
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 may not fully understand what is going on in the
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 and whether it is a lawful action or not.
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,
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 may think it is an appropriate action and follow the steps blindly. In conclusion, I believe that showing criminal
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 is important and can be shown on public TV.
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, it should be aired during
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's bedtime.
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,
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 are not exposed to the
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.
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