Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?
In the contemporary world, more private
cars
can be seen on the Use synonyms
roads
as compared to the Use synonyms
last
thirty years. Linking Words
As a result
, we are seeing high traffic jams in most of the cities throughout the world. I completely agree with Linking Words
this
statement. Linking Words
Therefore
, I would assert that the Linking Words
government
should take some steps to cope with Use synonyms
this
situation by encouraging Linking Words
people
to do more carpooling and using public transport most often Use synonyms
as well as
by restricting the number of Linking Words
cars
by a family.
To commence, there are various solutions that the Use synonyms
government
can take to resolve Use synonyms
this
issue worldwide. Linking Words
Firstly
, carpooling, that not only saves petrol or diesel expenses on the Linking Words
cars
but Use synonyms
also
reduces big traffic jams on the Linking Words
roads
. Providing rides to co-workers or schoolmates up to the specific pointsUse synonyms
,
can be a beneficial measure to deal with higher roadblocks on the Remove the comma
apply
roads
. Use synonyms
Consequently
, Linking Words
this
will mitigate pollution Linking Words
along with
congestion on the streets and Linking Words
people
will reach Use synonyms
at
their destinations in less time than usual.
Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, using public transportation, which is quite cheap, can be another step to deal with Linking Words
this
situation. The Linking Words
government
should encourage Use synonyms
people
to take more public transport to travel to the nearest places. Use synonyms
This
can be done, if there are Linking Words
less
fares or no fares, to travel in public buses or trains. Change the quantifier
fewer
Thus
, Linking Words
people
will use these facilities more in order to save their money which ends up with Use synonyms
less
private Correct quantifier usage
fewer
cars
on the Use synonyms
roads
.
In conclusion, private vehicles on the Use synonyms
roads
cause major traffic congestion on the road these days since every member of the family has their own car as compared to the current situation on the Use synonyms
roads
in the Use synonyms
last
thirty years. Linking Words
Therefore
, the Linking Words
government
should take steps Use synonyms
such
as enhancing carpool strategy and providing better public transportation facilities to the locals.Linking Words
Submitted by deepamankaur208 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
Ensure that each paragraph has one clear main idea and that all sentences in the paragraph contribute to that idea. This will make your arguments more concise and compelling.
coherence cohesion
Use transition words and phrases more extensively to show relationships between sentences and paragraphs. This will enhance the flow of your essay.
tasks achievement
Include more specific examples and data to substantiate your points. This will make your arguments stronger and more convincing.
coherence cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion are well-formed and provide a clear framework for your argument.
task achievement
You clearly addressed the essay prompt and provided relevant ideas and solutions.
task achievement
Your use of language is generally clear and understandable.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example