Some people think that only government could make changes in society and individuals can not do anything to new develpment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argued that only governments could implement

policies

and promote new developments,

while

individuals

can do nothing but rely on them. Personally, I disagree about

this

statement, it is because even though most

people

are just civilians, it does not mean they have no power to influence the

policies

making and change the

world

. Many progressions in recent years are promoted by

general

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the general

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people

. To be more specific,

individuals

keep making a lot of efforts in different industries,

such

as science, medicine or

environment

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the environment

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every day.

For example

, Apple’s founder, Marc Jacobs with his partner, worked in a garage, to invent new techniques and

then

establish the company, which is one of the most popular enterprises

and

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promote the touched-screen devices to the

world

, started up a new technological era.

In addition

,

individuals

could force the

government

to make improvements. They may not stand with the

policies

and decide to stand up for

people

, like holding up speeches or even strikes or protests.

Moreover

, press the

government

to enforce laws and regulations.

For instance

, a historical person- Mr Cheng in Taiwan, burned himself to address his belief in human speaking rights,

this

move forced the

government

to focus on

people

’s anger and adjusted the

policies

of freedom. In conclusion,

individuals

are powerful to keep

this

world

upgrading by engaging in different areas and fulfilling their abilities.

Furthermore

,

people

could

also

have the

government

aware of the topics, which are overlooked or underestimated, ultimately,

influence

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influencing

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their decisions to elevate the

world

.