Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?
Nowdays
when Correct the word
Nowadays
everyone
want
to do some sort of sport and we have incredible choices it can be quite hard to decide for Change the verb form
wants
government
where Correct article usage
the government
thei
put the finances. We have two Correct your spelling
they
groupes
one think that Correct your spelling
groups
sport
centres should be Change the noun form
sports
avaiable
for Correct your spelling
available
everyone
and second
who suppose that Correct article usage
the second
athletes
should be in separate complexes. In my opinion
it should be fair the public should have space to use facilities but Add a comma
,opinion
also
athletes
need to have it.
Reagarding
those who are of the opinion that sports complexes should be for Correct your spelling
Regarding
everyone
it can be seemed
that the facilities are just for the Change to the active voice
seem
pivileged
ones and they don't have Correct your spelling
privileged
privilege
Correct article usage
the opportinity
opportinity
to train, because all the money Correct your spelling
opportunity
are
provided for top Correct subject-verb agreement
is
athletes
. Another thing is that, if the
sports will be Correct article usage
apply
avaiable
for Correct your spelling
available
everyone
, we will have much
more talented Correct quantifier usage
many
athletes
, who will be able to repreent
internationally.
Correct your spelling
represent
On the other
hand
there are countries, Add a comma
,hand
who
believe the centres should be just for Correct pronoun usage
that
the
Correct article usage
apply
athletes
. There are many reasons, firstly
the
international representation is for the Correct article usage
apply
athletes
like a job, which they do for eight hours a day. Of course
they need to stay focused Add a comma
,course
instead
of being interupted
by Correct your spelling
interrupted
public
, that's clear no one Add an article
the public
want
to be annoyed during Change the verb form
wants
the
work. Another reason for the separation of the top Correct article usage
apply
athletes
is definitely protection of
Change preposition
against
illneses
, as we can see during the covid Correct your spelling
illnesses
illness
pandemics
it is easy to get some sort of virus and for many Fix the agreement mistake
pandemic
Correct your spelling
sportsmen
sportsmans
one Add a comma
,sportsmans
ilness
Correct your spelling
illness
such
as covid 19 means the end of the season.
To conclude
I believe that the building of special facilities for athletes
is a good way how to achive
Correct your spelling
achieve
the
Correct article usage
apply
succes
Correct your spelling
success
on
international Change preposition
in
competition
Fix the agreement mistake
competitions
such
as Olympic
games. Correct article usage
the Olympic
However
we should Add a comma
,However
also
build places for the public to support them to do some movement because sports shape not only nice bodies but most importantly nice personalities.Submitted by jjgh
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